All Comments on 'Camping with Daughter Ch. 03'

It is starting to wear at me a bit. I'm patiently waiting to find out when this "incest" is going to occur.

Just as she teases her Dad so you tease the readers . Nice job Harry.

Scottie

This is a great work; true eroticism, not just a series of hardcore scenes strung together. I can't wait for the next installment.

Great storytelling. A little slow for the Literotica scene but that's not a fault! Well written and great imagery. Looking forwar dto the next slice!

Another fine work Harry!

Love this story..

Have been waiting for a sequel but havent seen anything.

Your writing skill is great and keeps me wanting more.. Please continue!!!

Beautiful build up so far...waitng the climax.

Loved reading this story, it is fantastic. Please write ch.04 soon as this story should not be left as is.

Of all the excuses her father mentioned when trying to convince Jennifer that what she wanted from him was not right in his eyes, you never had him tell her that there are actually laws against the things she was requesting of him, as he was her parent and thus responsible for her moral welfare. If it were to get out that he was seen walking around naked with her being in the same condition in this moral climate, he would most likely be arrested for simply appearing to be having incestual relations with his offspring.

Of course, Jennifer would scoff at this and find a way to turn this argument around in her favor, but I just thought that it should at least have been put out there because the father, with his higher moral values, would have been aware of the illegalities of what Jennifer was trying to propose, and not because they outraged his moral sensibilities, no matter how confused she was making him once this entire situation had originally begun.

Aside from this one thing, the story is really well written and progressing nicely, and at a well conceived pace. I look forward to the next installment.

We have always been open with our daughter and none of us wear clothes around the house and even when I had the frequent hard on I never did anything to hide it, in fact not even when my wife or I fondled it. Our daughter not only saw us naked but saw both of us masturbate so it was natural that she never hid when she masturbated. We loved to watch her and her emotions while doing it. The thing I liked the best is sometmess when she saw me masturbating she would kneel down along side of me and take over with both her hands and mouth. And yes, she too loved to swallow. -Bare469

Sperm makes her hungry! I love it!!