All Comments on 'Camping with Wendy'

...Wendy and Matt hooked up. Then it became an obviously immature and amateur attempt to put words into what I can now only assume was a fictitious girl's mouth. Girls just don't talk that way!! Sorry, but the story was pretty lame after that!

It started off well enough but the ending was rushed and seemed like it was written by someone else. Too bad!

...your story was fine. However, once you'd hooked up, it went down hill fast. The sex was fine-- the words you put into her mouth were beyond unlikely.

The story reads like that of an adolescent, one who had been canoe camping before and could describe it, but who had only imagined actual sex. Too bad, because the first part wasn't badly written.

Is this by any chance Wendy from kingsway Gloucester?

Started ok. Degenerated fast. Killed the story.