All Comments on 'Can I Love? Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Don't make us wait to long

that was one of the best yet. can't wait to read more.

KokopelliRisesKokopelliRisesabout 17 years ago
More please...

I have been following this story for a bit now and I can't wait to find out the ending. Please post the next one soon.

Nightowl22Nightowl22about 17 years ago
Good.

The letter has done exactly what he wanted it to do and he should be seeing her soon.. When they meet, what will they decide about their relationship?. Wiil it lead to marriage?. You do write well!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Excellent Story

An excellent story and I look forward to the next chapter. You are a very good writer, covering very well the mixed emotions of a rape victim. The suspense and twist of Tom being the rapist's son is very creative.

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