All Comments on 'Can I Take Your Picture?'

by jeleane

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
OnlyByMoonlightOnlyByMoonlightover 14 years ago
Pretty darn good...

The only thing I would suggest is making the sex longer. It felt a tad disproportionate to the build up

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Your stories are so hot I have read them all I hope you keep writing because your amazing at it

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous