by Carolb127
Carolb127, Loved reading your hot story,had me hard as a rock in no time! I plan on reading more after I get rid of this hard problem I'm having. Your bio reminds me a lot of my first wife and myself. We did a lot of fucking around and telling each other what all happened always got us both horny as hell. Thanks
yeaiam12@yahoo.com
I gave it a 3 - hit the wrong key - should have been a 2
My reason: there was no plot - girl meets boy and and they spend all night fucking is not a plot. The setting (travelers stranded by a storm) has been worked to death
The quality of the writing is somewhat above average for this list. If you had introduced some tension into the story line, or a twist somewhere, it would have improved things greatly. The "twist" at the end (woman tells her man about the sex) reminds me of Anthony's story "Those Things Happen" - in other words, there isn't much original about this story
How often have I looked at a woman in an airport and wished something like this could happen
loved the tickling part at the end. It was a cute part of the story!