All Comments on 'Cancun'

Great romantic story..glad it worked out for you. It brought back my memories of spring break trips and found loves.

I enjoyed your story very much.

Boyd

I loved the story, hated not finding more submissions from you to read. Too many times a love story ends without the touch of having the lovers happy and married. Your story was damn near perfect as far as I am concerned and I will reread it often I am sure. I look forward to more stories from you.

I was shocked while reading this story. I too am from MN and found myself laughing at the "Little house in the Priarie" referance. I would like to read more from you!

I loved this straight romance story!

Some more please!

John

done just the way I like it

Guess I'm hopelessly romatic but this one was very good indeed :)

Nice story and the wonderful ending. Outstanding writing. Don't stop

You're a great writer, my friend; hence the reason that you're in my Favorite's list. Please give us more

MoogPlayer aka Gerry

only problem is he is too old for her. when she is at her hottest he will be far removed from very good sex EVEN if he want to be hot for her....once and he is done for the night and might need Viagra just to do that

The only thing that would have made it better for me was if he had already broken up with his girlfriend. I don't like cheating. Otherwise a very nice romance.

I like it, it's well written, not too long, to be honest, I didnt want it to end,

Perfect! That little extra,after they’d returned from Mexico, was the icing on the cake!