All Comments on 'Cancun Candids Ch. 01'

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hair94hair94over 14 years ago
great story

great story....please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice reading, hot as hell !!!!

really nasty hot fucking nice story :D

plz more

i beg for more =)

reader231reader231over 14 years ago
HOT

Busted! So how is his sister gonna punish him? ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Typical little brother

Just what most brothers would do except I think he took a big chance taking his dick out on the beach in front of his sleeping sister . Good story so far .

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
GREAT story! Looking forward to more chapters.

Great job! Nice description and build-up. Looking forward to more chapters. Is sis mad at her brother for taking the pictures? Maybe she'll pose for him in her little bikini and sexy high heels for a "private photoshoot"? Lots of potential........

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
where's the next chapter???

totally hot, man! Not my area of interest, but ya rocks!

dun let the pot cool man!

regards.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Totally Hot

Hey, great story! Why so long on chapter 2??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
hey

when are you going to finish this story I was enjoying it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Can't Wait!

Please! Write more!

dwm007dwm007almost 14 years ago
wheres chapter 2

I loved this story, can't wait for next installment.

When sis sees next picture with is cock, will she jump on him?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

REally hot story. Please finish it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Looking for Chapter 2

Will this be finished?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing

I'm a long-time user of this site, and I know a good story when I read one. This is not one. This, is an AMAZING story. perfect background info without it being boring, fantastic description, great setting. All a person could ask for in a story. Now PLEASE finish it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
chapter 2 please

Very good story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
amazing

please writ the second part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
well???

Where is part two...dont leave us hanging :)

ansdguyansdguyover 11 years ago
Honestly, This older brother...

is actually a non too smart 13 year old. To think that guy is a 20 year old adult is beyond comprehension. Fiction or not, simply silly story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
So far so good

This is awesome so far... Loving it...

KINKYCanadaKINKYCanadaabout 9 years ago
Erotic with out the sex!

Well done Eric. I am liking your style!

kiteareskitearesover 5 years ago
Abandoned!!

It's good as far as it goes, but it's been left hanging.

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