All Comments on 'Candace Ch. 02'

That was good. But, you need to have some more parts to this. Maybe a part about the daughter and her friend taking on the dad. You have to keep going though.

A truly fantastic story...I can't wait to see where it goes next!

Definately need more with daddy catching his daughter and friend together again and him joining in.

pretty good story.. i like the bit of build up you have. from the first with the father watching the daughter to the first blow-job.. taking it by steps and making it more realistic.. lol. keep up the good work and i can't wait to see what happens next ;)

You need to add a ch3. I gave it a ( 3 ) becused you left me hanging.you need to go all the way with this storie

Not a bad story overall, but you really need an editor. You left out whole words in several places, and F.Y.I., the past tense of 'drag' is 'dragged', not 'drug'.