by blackstallion21
Especially in light of you being a man writing as a woman in the story. I agree wholeheartedly with Klaxx's comment. You be a good boy now if you want Ms. Santa to give your big black dick something for Xmas!
Sorry, but I thought you jumped too quickly into the sex and didn't give enough build-up, to establish the story. Thanks for sharing it with us and keep on trying. ;)
Absolutely loved it. Well written and HIGHLY erotic. My only complaint is that it was too short.<br><br>Oh, and I'M a man. Watch the generalizations. Prejudice is ugly from any direction.
OOH, this has been the most criticized of all of my stories on Lit... Sorry for my human mistake, Henry/George... and to the hater, i am really sorry but opinions are like assholes. everyone has one. thanks to those who commented for the better! and Merry Christmas!
It was okay, but I thought they got into it a little too fast. By the way, the central chartacter of "It's a Wonderful Life" is named George Bailey.
Ignore the basher. I'm sure it was a man. It was well written.