All Comments on 'Candy Shop'

Your spin was way hotter than the predictable, formulated dribble of the music video. I'm not a fan of this music - but I'm a big fan of yours. Keep rockin', kim.

Love the song and the story!

Love the idea! Very creative and well written, much better than many I've read at this site. At first I thought "lollypop" with a "y" may have been spelled wrong until I checked it out and discovered either way ("y" or "i") is perfectly acceptable. Looking forward to many more. Maybe she can give lessons to other women and use her candy shop as a match-making service.

Um, thanks for the comment, "Anonymous." I wanted to keep the spelling congruent with the way it was quoted from the lyrics, although the "i" spelling is my preference. Glad to hear you enjoyed it. I'm not quite sure what is in store for Emm and JT. I have a few ideas, but nothing really solid at this point. Suggestions for developments in continuing their story are always welcome. (smile)

That's a fun story and a really nice venue. The idea of kisses after hot cinnamon candy's rather appealing. I'll have to try that soon. Thank you! :)

Damn! This one was hot! I'm not a fan of the type of music in this story, but perhaps a download of the song is in order now. I'd love to see a sequel.

I'm smiling ear to ear! I love it when I get caught by surprise, just like the ending of this story and the setup that JT got! Mind if I trot this story out next time anyone thinks I'm reading their mail when all I'm really doing is paying attention???

Tip: sugar causes yeast infections

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Otherwise, great development and great writing. Looking forward to more from you!

This is incredible! Between the setting and the utter charm of Emm and JT this story succeeds incredibly well at getting me all warm and fuzzy as well as hot and bothered! Masterful descriptions that so beautifully bring this to life, and what a clever ending! Excellent job Kim I really can't wait to read more!

A very delicious story, and I love 'happpily ever after' endings

I loved this story. Its a wonderful little gem. Excellent work. You have a gift.

I like how she went after what she wanted and how hot it was. Thank you for writing this.

That was absolutely amazing. :kiss:

There's a sweet shop in the town where I live. I'm totally going to pay more attention when I walk past from now on... ;)

Great story! Aren't we overdue for a new one...? :)

I've just become addicted :-). Sweet, sweet words. I think you may get a random random email Kimmey.

That yeast infection tho 😫