All Comments on 'Cape Town Threesome - Finally'

excellently written and very erotic!!

A very overdone theme handled very well. Looking forward to the rest.

Sexually intense build-up, and the issues/challenges are well managed. Realistic for a change from most of the stuff on this site. Keep going! Really interested to see how things progress.

I liked the build up. I think about my wife with another man and it turns me on more that anything. Looking forward to part 2.

love shyness and hesitancy...building into something outside a woman's comfort zone...very well done on every level

More sick fucks yay for us!

I liked the long realistic buildup, and it's kind of an enticingly climactic-yet-anticlimactic ending. Definitely looking forward to a sequel.

Cause you are fucking gay dude, perhaps bi but for sure you are into dicks. Good luck, you need it.

"...if she is fucked by another man then she is highly desirable; my pleasure comes from the fact that she is mine".

But if she fucks another man after meeting you, then she really isn't yours, is she? I have no idea why any man would want his wife to fuck another man, or why any man would particularly want a "hand job". He could probably give himself a better hand job than any woman could. Don't bother with more of this garbage.

Will be very interested to how this progresses. Can't imagine she will be satisfied with the current play. The threesome is coming and so will she.

Great management of Sweetie's doubt and internal conflict!

First sentence told the tale. Another scum bag wimp ass new writer polluting the loving wives category with this fetish crap. These bastards are crawling out of the woodwork every day. When will it stop?

I do think you should have gotten it edited, not only for verb tense and spelling (tinged, not tinted), but to make the ideas flow more cohesively and the dialogue parts woven into some of the paragraphs. It's amazing how much more pleasurable a well-edited story can be, to read. Honest.

A story, sent to an editor in this condition, would not need a lot of work and would get returned to you, spelling mistakes gone, grammar cleaned up, and so forth, in a very short span of time.

Brain dead husband.

to read the enraged comments of men who claim not to understand why some men's fantasies include loaning their wife to another man for sex. These guys never comment on the technical merits of the writing but instead always rant and rave at the characters in the story, fictional characters, mind you. Why do they read this kind of thing if they hold it in such contempt? Not only read it, but take the time to comment! There is something interesting here going on in some men's minds. Are these men gay, bi, conflicted by emotions they don't understand, or even frightened by what these stories reveal about themselves? We need a discussion group just for this, I think. Men claim they don't understand women but what woman can make sense of these angry men?

These anonymous that are complaining are hilarious. Really, You don’t like this genre? READ SOMETHING ELSE YOU FUCKIN IDIOTS!!!

Great start! I was hooked right away and have the same desire for my wife. I've read your story twice now and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Can't wait for the next episode! A great start! Keep writing!

I need part 2

I really enjoyed this story. It reminded me of my one and only threesome, I was young and my boyfriend was wild. too much partying too much booze. We did it once. i must say the sexual pleasure was minimal because I was extremely nervous and self conscious. Not an easy thing...

Really hot, can't wait fir the conclusion.

and class writing. Well done you filthy saffer. 5*

You're bad and I'm glad, more please.

Perfect build-up. Cant wait for part two.

Great job buddy, you should be happy for having such a wonderful life partner.

Very hot, love the slow buildup, an her developing lust...

Very sexy story. Hope there is more to cum!

My nipples are rock hard and my pussy is gushing. Your story has me incredibly turned on. Please, continue quickly. I want to orgasm reading what happens next.

Congratulations!!!!!

GREAT story!!! Thanks!

Thanks for the great reading. Really enjoyed the story and I am looking forward to the second part. I don't give a crap about the spelling or grammar. I just want to read a good story, which I did. Some people just gotta complain about something. Pardon the grammar.

I enjoyed the build up and it was written with style. I look forward to the sequel.

When is the sequel coming.

Please post part 2!

Yaaaa... - Another 'shaved' kid ..

Brain also has a 'clean-shaven' ..

Whatsamatta? Got a real life or something? I really enjoyed this story, flaws and all. Very much looking forward to part two...along with a few other people, I gather.

When is part 2 coming. Been eagerly waiting for that

When will there "finally" be a sequel?

I take great pleasure in upsetting the likes of you.Your type just cannot help themselves but are forced by your very nature to comment on other readers that don't agree with your lifestyle. Who the fuck says we read these story completely. After the first paragraph, I stopped and immediately scores this fetish a 1*. It's scum like you that compels these wimp ass cuckold writers to continue posting their trash in loving wives. It will always be my pleasure to irritate and upset the likes of you, since you take comments so well. You fuckers make me laugh.

spanked my little monkey, squealed in shame, and left a preposterous comment claiming to have stopped reading."

Fixed that for ya closet cucky, yer welcome.

Maybe you should put your nom to it .

The story? Pure "1*" !

Amazing. Great writing. My wife and I would appreciate it if you would finish the story

One of the worst. "1*" !!

Liked this a lot. On to Next chapter

Great story, this goes just far enough to blow a load but not too far where I can’t share with my wife. She’ll like it and may take that first step too.

I could not stop reading this story. Very erotic and sensual. Wish this could be my story about my wife and myself and our first threesome. I may have to let my wife read this encounter and hope it changes her mind. I have a very beautiful wife and would love to watch her open her legs and share her beautiful mouth. Maybe someday.

Great story. Love how Melanie loved licking Carl's cum off her husband's dick

No wonder he was two and shoo'ed.

Straight by the book cuck drivel.

Loved it!! Things always look different when you’re aroused and Melanie is and most women are no different. Thanks