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Click hereI stared at the smiling faces as I felt the familiar anger rise up, the same anger that had fueled my passion for success. I smiled grimly. That fury had served me well in the past, but now was time for vengeance. And Emory was an integral part of this plan, whether she liked it or not.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoI've just read all 3 chapters and it is interesting. I feel that torturing Emory is a bad way to get back at Lee, however if by the end of the story the big bad Tristan softens towards the lovely Emory and she starts feelings for him then maybe just maybe that would be the revenge right there. I'm not for the violent ways she's been subjected to so far but maybe bringing in some pleasurable torture would be the way to go. I really do like the story and hope my comment hasn't put you down in any way x
Anonymousover 10 years agoTo those who are against the more violent aspects of this story should really not be looking at the noncon tag. I mean this site is littered with consentual sex stories so maybe it would be better if you looked elsewhere. Heed my advice or not it doesn't matter to me but please don't pay out on the authors for your misunderstanding of the words NOT CONSENTUAL (which means FORCED).
Either way I'm loving this story, warts and all, and can't wait for the next chapter!
FA_JFover 10 years ago(I kinda liked the old name...)
If you don't know what kind of issues someone might have with a minister's son, you haven't personally know any preacher's kids....... lol
Anonymousover 10 years agoKeep going and ignore the haters! Ths is how it should be in NonConsent stories. Ruthless. :)
Anonymousover 10 years agoPeople seem to be really annoyed with the fact that she's being tortured or that she's an unrelatable charecter. I think this a story to follow. Stylistically, every post is getting better and better. This story has real potential, give it a chance before you come in hot about it being to much or not enough. If torture or sadism is something that you find offensive, maybe steer clear of the NonCon genre. I think it's a good story with a good developing plot line. Does it need to develop more? Of course. But don't knock the whole story while it's clearly in the process. Good job Nikki, keep it coming.
Phil_Patsfanover 10 years agoWhy torture Emory to get back at Lee? What does that accomplish? You haven't really defined her relationship with him and she admits that they have not been intimate yet; so what sort of leverage could Tristan have on Lee's family by kidnapping and torturing his girlfriend (other than guilt)? It really doesn't make a lot of sense (yet). Right now it's just torture for his own sadistic pleasure, which is fine if that is what the story is about. Plus, what kind of problem can you have with a Minister's son? I think you have a lot of holes to fill in.
Anonymousover 10 years agoWhy is it that when someone in these types of stories wants to get back at someone they go after the girl and torture and abuse het instead of being real men and going after the family or the other man? The story is well written but abusing someone who has nothing to do with the family is just cowardly. The abuse this girl can take is not realistic though. I hope inthe end he gets abused just like her if you can dish it out you should be able to take it.
spearishover 10 years agoVery intriguing and well written although I will agree that no human could tolerate that level of abuse without passing out but hey ...it's fiction and Tristan sounds very diabolical.More please.
Anonymousover 10 years agoIf you are going to torture someone for chapters on end for a story, at least have the sense to give the character enough of a personality that you can connect with them on some level so that you actually care about the torture you are reading about. What is the difference between this girl and ANY random horror movie victim? Not a damn thing and the villain is not any better written. Neither character is memorable or even remotely interesting. Learn how to build good characters before working on plots.
