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Click hereThe downfall of a true genius is his desire to get caught, I mused to myself. Very true words. I liked to play my games fairly. I had given Emory all of the clues to figure me out. I was playing fair. She had a chance, if only she could put the pieces together. But she wouldn't. I was confident of that. Because beneath this bravado she was exhibiting was a meek little slut who didn't want to figure me out. She ached to trust me, though it went against all common sense. Emory probably wasn't even aware of it yet, but she soon would be. I had fucked with enough minds to know.
Stockholm syndrome. I could already see it developing in the deep recesses of her eyes when I gave her the bottle of aloe vera. It wasn't sympathy on my part. It was a calculated move, like everything else, even the exaggerated moments of vulnerability in the basement. She was beginning to feel a loyalty to me that defied all reason. She would fight it, but her own conclusions about my past only fueled her pity. I knew that she had been digging around in my desk. I kept the important information locked away, but she should have found enough to begin to draw a few conclusions. When the time was right, she would play right into my hands.
I needed a new plan though if she were to be ready in a few days time. I could torture her myself until she fell apart, but I wasn't inclined to go that route. I could do it, certainly, but it would only cause her to hate me, erasing all loyalty and pity she may feel. No, I had to impose fear, certainly, but I wanted her to look at me like her savior. I wasn't sure where this new interest had come from, only that toying with Emory thrilled me. How far could she be manipulated? How long would she hold out? How low could she be forced to go? These questions excited me to no end. I had intended to release her after she played her part, but she was too fascinating to me. I had never been so fully and completely in control of someone's fate before, and it was intoxicating.
The first stages of a new course of action began to form in my mind. Delighted with my new direction, I slowly ascended the stairs to my bedroom. After all, if this were to work, I needed my rest just as much as Emory did.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous6 months agoThe only thing this story rings with is the author's hoisting of his own petard. For such a cocksure affectation, it's both bereft and abandoned. 🙄
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoPleeeeeeeeeeeease write more.....i just looooove non consenual stories....Working on one myself based on my own fantasies and dreams...what i wish would happen to me if i was kidnapped(which is a dream and fantasy for me to come true,but it never will....*sighs*)....Wish i was young again...Now that i have kids it's hard...
Anonymousabout 9 years agoWish it would be finished. Hope Emory is successful at outsmarting her captor.
Anonymousover 9 years agoBreaks my heart when a story with so much promise is left hanging. Cruel...very cruel.
jennyb2492over 10 years agoOh, I'm here. Just forgot to comment, but I have been voting. I love this story so far. Hoping the next chapter comes out soon!
Anonymousover 10 years agoPersonally I can see this story being rather long and drawn out (the way I like it) and full of content so I'm happy with the way it's written. I do like a story that is pre-planned and it's reassuring that Nikki07 has it all planned out. I mean, unlike heaps of non-con stories that are never finished atleast this story will have both substance and an ending.
A good story is made through the attitude of the reader in my books. If you are unwilling to look at a story objectively and see what it may become than what was the point of reading it this far? Or is it that these annointed 'haters' are simply trolls or just love spreading their words of hate to get a rise? If they are the latter than I think that they are probably not mentally mature enough for this site let alone this section.
Anyhow, I digress. Another interesting submission and I am interested for the next. Nikki07 you are a good writer and don't you forget it!
With love, Anonymous
Phil_Patsfanover 10 years agoFirst of all, If you write we will read and comment. I actually think your story is compelling (as well as well-written), I just don't understand Tristan's endgame. We know he is sadistic, but is he looking for revenge on Lee Donovan for something in the past? If so, is he going to get revenge by breaking Emory and turning her into his sex slave to rub in Lee's face? He admitted that he originally planned to release her, but now he had changed his mind. So he has a vendetta against Lee and she is caught in the middle and whatever happens to her is just collateral damage? That's a little unfair, don't you think? I think we need more back story on Lee Donovan and his relationship with Tristan. Looking forward to chapter 5.
FA_JF: I didn't like the old name, I thought it was kind of lame. As for ministers' sons I've never met one so I'll have to take your word for it. We need to bring in LB, WB, JenneyB, the Baron, Hispet, and others on this story. It's getting too good.
rdoolittleover 10 years agoYou seem to be causing a lot of controversy! I like your sure footed style. Would you consider writing your next story from the point of view of a female sadist? That might really be your groove.
