All Comments on 'Capturing the Moment'

Precisely what my partner needs.

What a photo shoot!!!! When do we see the next one???? Loved it. Thanks for sharing...

More please

You are telling about her features from a third party perspective, then introduce her as shy and not knowing about her beauty, then the photographer comes in.

It would be more convincing, if you introduced a shy woman, meeting the photographer who discovers her beauty and features and tells the reader about them. Then you would not begin with the narrator and improve the flow of the story.

We still not understand why a shy person would want to have those kind of pictures made, but hey we don't need to know everything ...

Oh, Cheri you have done it yet again. Your descriptions of what Tabitha thought of herself, what the photographers saw and what they all felt sent me over the top twice. MORE PLEASE!

Reading this, I felt like I captured a moment, as your skillful and artistic writing opened my imagination up to the physical appearances, thoughts, emotions, hot sexual fervor and then powerful orgasmic release of Tabitha and Josh, while Brent recorded their magic with his camera.

Very hot, very well written, and thanks for sharing this experience!

I really enjoy stories in which someone learns something about themselves which had been hitherto unsuspected.

Just thinking of it just makes me sopping wet and super horny.

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