All Comments on 'Car Buff Ch. 03'

Keep the series going...I love the plot and characters! I can't wait for the next one! Please don't make us wait to long.

not bad either. Still think the hero of the story is dumber than fuck. Won't go home untill he clears his name? What a dumb ass, he has everything he needs to clear his name, what with his friend and now a tape of him getting beat up. Still afraid his mommy will be ashamed of him? You come across as being 12. looking forward to something that explains what the hell's going on.

You know you;ve got a good story when your readers are skipping over the sex to read the plot to see what happens next. Great plot, got me hooked, keep it up.

It's a great story line, but Lit doesn't have a Mystery category, so let's solve the mystery in Chapter Four and deliver it soon? Quickly before the 10th anniversary of your last Chapter?? Yeah, the sex is good, but so far he's only nailed one lady, so it's like he's almost still virgin. When does he seduce Brielle, then his sister, maybe another couple of classmates and teachers? How about going back to Robinson's office and nailing his young black receptionist? Or introduce Kat's sister and daughter? Or, yeah, please just solve the mystery? Thanks,