by davidwriter
I've been a fan of this series since day 1 and have awaited anxiously for each chapter as they've come out. This has to be the best one so far!
I never would have though you could make sex with a 20-ish woman and an 80-year-old man seem erotic but davewriter did just that. From the slow seduction of the train ride to the final scene this one takes the cake!
Great job and keep up the great work!
I agree with the above comment, except I liked Chapter 8 the best, so far. The presents of a flower and candy were a nice way to say he was watching her naked yoga. I hope this series lasts a long time. Thanks for writing it.
You tagged this story an "Erotic Coupling", but had an old man molest a sleeping woman (who may have been given drugged wine)... you made the woman decide once she woke up to his fondling to allow a pity feel, and then you had the old pervert rape her. The old man had no idea she almost consented as he believed her to be asleep still or drugged... she finally relented and allowed a pity fuck. Shouldn't this story have been termed a "Fetish" instead?
she is going to be pregnant in no time. I hope she hooks up with that pretty young thing from the swimming pool.