All Comments on 'Car Trouble'

Loved the story. I did envision the story and possible ending. Just exactly what I like to read a few days before Halloween. Thanks for writing this!

Came across this after reading your winter 2014 submission. I liked this a lot. It was actually rather sad to me. I'd love to read a follow up where she's able to meet her again somehow. It just seemed as though they had too little time together. Anyway, wonderful story. Hope to see more.

It is great that one of this site's most original writers is back in action after a long break. There is a clear understanding of lesbian eroticism.

At the end, it kind of looks like there's more to this story. Well, at least I hope there is! :)

I absolutely loved this story. Amazing work.

Can you please finish this story? I fell in love. You can have Lisa find her spirit again or something. Just please try to continue it with some reunion (:

Intriguing, passionate and well written

Thank you.

HP

This is a wonderful story. It is extremely sensual without being crass. You know there is something special about Amy but NOT evil. If anything she is/would be an angel or benevolent spirit. Lisa's is the kind of encounter I would wish to have (I'm not speaking of the homosexual/lesbian nature).