All Comments on 'Car Trouble'

That was both beautiful and kinky as hell. You're such an illustrative writer. But did you have to keep using "white gold?" Once was nice, but after that it just got ridiculous.

I have just read all of your stories about the two of you and love them can I just say that in regards to your description of Zul, don't use the same details in every story, as once you read one any reader will read them all and it becomes repetitive. Also I am assuming that you are both of a similar age, why does he always call you "kid" and never your name "Tyler?" especially at the end there when he said he loved you, which was beautiful by the way, that is a special moment.

I can appreciate some things stay private I just thought that would add more but I like your writing and your adventuresome spirit don't stop

Hot! Loved the story line. Keep going!

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