All Comments on 'Carabella Ch. 02'

What, first he starts all this and *then* he wants to slow donwn? Can't he make up his mind? LOL.

<br>Loved the new installment! Looking forward to the next one. <br>

Just one minor quibble on the last paragraph: He faces her on the couch, and then he kisses her shoulder blades? Sorry, anatomically impossible (since they are located on the backside), unless he has a rubberlike neck like Mr Fantastic... I guess you meant her clavicle/collarbone!?

You're probably right. I'll definitely check it out, and fix my anatomy! LOL! Thanks for the heads-up! As to the men...yeah, they're as contradictory a bunch as we are! LOL! I'm glad you liked this chapter.

You're probably right. I'll definitely check it out, and fix my anatomy! I'm probably thinking her shoulder blades are on top - you know, where shoulder pads would go. LOL! Thanks for the heads-up! As to the men...yeah, they're as contradictory a bunch as we are! LOL! I'm glad you liked this chapter.

What a story. Wow!

Another masterpiece from you.I love the way you write Dawn.