All Comments on 'Carabella Ch. 05'

I love the way the professor's desire for the older student becomes more frantic and passionate with each coupling. I can picture him trembling the way that you describe him.

I also caught that hint about Rick's other side, the one that he determined not to reveal yet to Bella. What could it be? Yum!

I hope you will be moved at some point to return to the story and continue it. The first five chapters are so promising that it's definitely worth the effort.

I have written more. I just need to edit it and then pot it here. I'm glad you enjoyed these chapters. I rather like Rick and Bella myself! :)

"She was the woman he used to dream about, as a raw teenager, the woman who would fill the hole in his chest that not even his writing ever filled..."

the woman anyone would dream about.

To me he souinds more like a spoiled puppy then a human being,,, now with the quirk about him wanting her to submit to him ,,, just turned the whole story to utter trash,,, file 13 here you go,, garbage

...how the people who have the harshest criticisms are usually anonymous. If you can't stand by your convictions, no one needs to hear your thoughts. They're not worth listening to if you're too chicken to show your face as you make them!