All Comments on 'Caregiver Ch. 02'

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paheelonepaheeloneabout 11 years ago
GREAT

great story ...the ending made it seem so real ..cause not everything in life has a happy ending .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Overall, a medicore story. Rough start, rough end. I'm anxious to see your stories develop though as you write more and more.

Only gets bonus points because of the Blackhawks reference. :P

-- A fellow 'Hawks fan (wearing jersey and waiting for puck drop.)

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