All Comments on 'Caribbean Swap'

by thor353

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fregenfregenover 15 years ago
Not really

It's not a swap if one partner does it without the other knowing about it. Then it's called cheating.<P>

Sorry but you don't develop the characters enough for me to care about them. Mike is a good dancer. Michelle doesn't mind cheating on Andy because Mike is a good dancer? Mike doesn't mind shafting his friend Andy because...? Andy knows that Michelle cheats on him? Doesn't know? Doesn't care? You gave us a snippet rather than a story. But thanks for sharing.

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