All Comments on 'Caring for the Colonel'

The ending was sureal. Everyone knows that somone would do more than just not vote for the colonel. I can't believe I hung and read the whole story.

I loved the story, but however weak one is they are entitled to pursue some kind of justice. Maybe not so in real life, but that's what makes stories

I would have done the same as Cooper. You can't fight the rich, especially when you don't have money. Thoughts of revenge can be expected, but after taking the time to really think about it, anyone with any sense would have let it go. I enjoyed this story; it was wonderfully written - without the grammatical errors that so often turn me away. Unfortunately I thought it dragged on a little too much, but that is only my opinion. I still read it all the way through, so kudos to you.

I am sorry, but ready this didn't get me hard, instead it made me sad. It was more of a story of a pathetic man than an erotic story.

Okay, the worm has been stepped on, now he has to turn. I'm looking forward to the sequel. There's going to be one, right? <G> Best, Ken

Oh my gowd! I really hate That perverted old man! How could he do that to a man that had been taking care of him while he's injured? But it's a great story anyway.. And i can't wait to read the sequel.. (copper and his saviour)

I thought the story was great. I liked Cooper (a slightly pathetic fellow but so real) and the Marine was such a narcissistic ass! Loved it!

The best part of the story was him declaring he would NOT vote for the Colonel.

would love to see an elaborate revenge plot come from this. he may never be able to prove anything to the authorities or the press, but revenge doesn't require proof. that colonel is just the type of character you love to see lose everything in a publicly humiliating way followed by some serious jail time in a pound-me-in-the-ass prison for the rest of his life.

and even better, cooper can find love and success with someone in a position to help him with his vengeance. a new patient perhaps???

I like The Part to please below maybe he coukd be with the person runnung against the colonel and get his umm shit domonix revenge or whatever Love This.... I think u should part two it

Maybe Cooper can worm his way into the the life and heart of the colonel's wife and have an affair with her. Like give Cooper sex that she wouldn't give the Colonel. Cooper has to get even. I was actually thinking the Colonel was going to have a heart attack while screwing Cooper, that would make great headlines!

Every story on Literotica doesn't have to be wall to wall sex and have a happy ending. I think you did a good job here. And the ending unfortunately is realistic...it isn't fair but the rich and powerful have the rest of us by the gonads.

It was good sad but it would be hot if he could prove he was with him like payback kind of thing sad ending but it was hot I really thought he come back.

turned into the fuckin cask of amontillado at the end there. how am i meant to jerk off to that shit, i ask you

Damn, the Colonel did him dirty. I wanted him to get revenge!

I kinda guessed early what was going to happen. Could you add to the story about revenge