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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

really cute start to a story of discovery

Qui3t0n3Qui3t0n3almost 11 years ago
dis

is guna b some hot shit I can tell yep

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Don't make us wait too long for part 2!

rg27612rg27612almost 11 years ago
exquisite

Wow! Extremely well written. Waiting anxiously for chapter 2.

Missxc36Missxc36about 8 years ago
Nice!

Very interesting, and it held me to the end which is very gd as well. Not as steamy as I thought it would be, but it's only part 1 so curious to see what you have for us next. I like it tho, and enjoyed your characters. :)

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I hope you enjoy the works I post. Please take the time to add your vote and/or comments at the end of each story. Any and all feedback is appreciated. Much Thanks. ~Shadow~ 3.24.23 update: Thanks for reading and please let me know what you think.

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