All Comments on 'Carnal Connection Pt. 03'

This is one of the best I've read on Literotica...Pump it up. Maybe drop the orgy, sharing with grierson and maybe abe and jess but the others. I don't think mae and jenny and jeremy or sly are worth the ink .

good luck and keep writing..

Davideismyname@yahoo.com

Great Story. The sex left a little to much to the imaginaton, but the story, plot, and characters made up for that, easily. Thanks.

- Ron -

you could of left off the swapping crap, otherwise I really enjoy your story.