All Comments on 'Carol'

Good writing. Pithy yet stimulating.

Very good. Needs a lot more chapters of this barebacked fucking. It is obvious she is not on the Pill as her husband is on the road most of the time.

there are a few things that really confused me...

1)why mention Beverly Hills and the house being of a lower socio-economic level? It made no sense in the rest of the story.

2)If dad was soo abusive and they had to be quiet,

why are they yelling and hooting and hollering.

Consistancy!!!!!

There has to be a second chapter. You've got our attention, now lets see where this leads. Very good and hot start.

I could picture the neighborhood and the best friends Mom in the town I grew up in. Good job! It was Hot!

Hot but too short, Needs another part or two.

I liked it. Please continue writing stories - you are good at it.

One thing: Carol seems very interested in her son's attributes. Are you considering a sequel where she finds out her boy's endowments?

Jon's gonna have the happiest friends hanging around his place all the time!

This seems to be one of those hot never ending stories. This part was certainly a good tease. I am waiting for the next.

Loved it immensely....it made me want to try it with my best friend's mom.....Write more stories like this one!!!!!

I love it! I could picture her beautiful body so easily, too! I can't wait to read more!!!

What a hot woman, and hot story. Great fantasy and well written

How I wish could have done this with a mates Mum

Made me rock hard

Nothing quite like a neglected housewife. I can't wait to read more.