All Comments on 'Caroline'

Very nice indeed!The passion between those two was palpable.

A pretty tale of seduction. The dreams of many a high school boy. Well done.

WOW what a GREAT story! Thanks so much for sharing it! Being like the "Caroline" in this story, I have wondered many a time what it would be like to 'attack' an 18 year old buff boy before! Never did get up the nerve, but I think of it fairly often!

That was one of the best things i have ever read on the net. Thank you for this wonderful story

Don't be sorry about using English and not American spelling, be proud of it. (Although I did see an -ize rather than -ise somewhere! :-) )

A few bits of grammar to correct and one mistake that leapt out:

"Caroline was my best friend - Peter Foster's mother." I don't think Caroline was your best friend, more a lover! ;-)

However, this is nitpicking and it's a good story.

What a nurtureing loveing cockteaseing whench of a perfect woman...I'd probably fuck her...If she begged me enough and could cook anything better than burnt pizza.If she could cook;there wouldn't be any question.Cook,eat,fuck,and sleep;in no particular order.I'd be smitten with passion.Love would be good cooking everyday and twice on sundays.

One of the most erotic stories I have read in a long time. Good build up and wonderful climax. It is the stuff that we all dream of.

Caroline obviously was a very good example of what a Brit wife is all about. My experience reveals that there is hardly any woman that is hornier than a middle aged Brit wife that has been married, has a kid or two with her hubby and then starts looking for a younger man to fuck and get off on. This story is only lacking one thing and that is the possibility of Caroline wanting to have another baby, while she is still young enough to do so. While you are young enough to keep your dick hard while fucking her and she knows it, perhaps you can add a chapter to two to this story, to the point that you 'accidently' knock her up during her fertile period with her hubby not being any the wiser that maybe the bastard kid is not his. That you and her son are close would only offer an easier way for you to keep fucking her to that point and beyond...

Great story. Why not continue it with what else happens on the holiday and possibly when they get back home.

Great story and so very well told. Not sure why the excuse for UK English - it is all the better to me to be written well with good construction and punctuation. On top of the writing, it is one hell of a hot story.

Well done

But you need to learn the difference between "feint" and "faint".

was told of your writing by a friend ........excellent story and very well written...lucky lady!

Were votes being cast, I'd vote no sequel. This is wonderfully ended and leaves the reader an opportunity to exercise his/her imagination.

Your story had just the right amounts of teasing, excitement, passion. You're a masteful story teller and I trust you'll entertain us with further stories.

Excellent story...a nice long build up of sexual tension capped by a well paced lingering resolution. Great writing...keep up the good work!

As always, Well Done!

your foot note is correct, the story would have suffered if written in anything but English.

i like the way u went about explaing , as if i was there !! keep writing more , buzz me at rupla007@yahoo.com

Definitely one of the best! Your build up was slow sure and erotic. The climax all that the reader could hope for. Well done!

I thought it was a beautiful coming of age tale for your protagonist with a caring friend who loved him as much as he loved her. Since my British ancestors came to this country in 1665, I am very proud of my heritage. Thank you for trying to remain faithful to the native tongue. I can't tell you how much I appreciate that.

Liguistic quirks? I hardly noticed, but took a cue from location. Reponsible sex between healthy friends? Americans didn't invent melodrama, but I'm a fan. Thanks

Really enjoyed it

Loved the drawing out and dialogue.

very very good!

Well done! I agree totally with your description of the difference between ass and arse. Enjoyed your story totally!

One misspelling, “femme fetal” killed the story for me. Ok if you find the unborn baby look attractive on a woman.