All Comments on 'Caroline's Mom Ch. 07'

you get names mixed up. Rachel wasn't in this chapter at all, but you called her Rachel several times. Also Sheila was described as a blonde and I don't think auburn is blonde.

[Rachel asked me if we could try some "kinky" games up there. She wanted to be tied up and used anyway I wanted to. She did not want me to ask permission. Then she dropped the bombshell.

"I have been talking to my roommate Sheila about you."]

"rachel" should be "caroline"

[Looking at Rachel, "Am I in or out? Has he agreed?"]

should be "caroline"