All Comments on 'Carols After Hour Needs'

Don't worry about the comments. People are showing their asses. This is a nice fanticy.

Good story. Don't let the trolls get you down. It seems with the new year an additional bunch have appeared. I really wish they would go back where ever they came from.

Keep writing and don't let the jerks discourage you..

Mike S.

If you learn nothing else, learn that.

"smoothed the stockings up her leg's "

"absently ran her finger's through"

and so it goes, on and on and on

The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ,

Moves on: nor all thy Piety nor Wit

Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,

Nor all thy Tears wash out a Word of it.

A good tale, though, as you know.

Cheers.

Kilroy

Nill is to high to achieve

Ever notice this type of story rarely make a score of at least 4?