All Comments on 'Carpe Diem'

Interesting start. Not enough story. Keep going. :)

Incredible start! Cant wait to see where this goes; please continue!

great story so far please continue!!!

you must continue!!!

If the names at the top of your story are supposed to be Latin (as the title suggests), you have the pronunciation wrong. In Latin there is no letter k and "c" is always pronounced "k". The "s" sound suggested by you is Italian, not Latin.