All Comments on 'Carpe Diem Ch. 02'

by frozen_hotchocolate

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Anonymousover 12 years ago

Please continue!! This story is building up great!!

Anonymousover 12 years ago

This could become interesting ...

... I just hope you don't take the "easy way out" and let Layla forget what happened to her people or who is responsible. Up to now, this "emperor" seems to be just a bully. And PLEASE don't make her enjoy being raped ... that "fantasy" has been done to death anyway.

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