All Comments on 'Carvella Ch. 03'

those that write do those that don't complain hope to see this story continued. story is well written and well thought out but would like to see longer chapters

I read the other comments...women are like men, each one is different and some do submit and others dominate...nothing to do with sex, everything to do with being human. A great story. Tatiana knows how to analyze others, and when she finds a weak one, she knows how to dominate. Excellent insight and superb character construction...keep up the great work...

First of all I think the story is hot, but then I know what is going to happen. xoxoxo.

Secondly it is "fantasy", if I were to write boring relationship building scenarios I would go to sleep. Loosen up, enjoy it honey, it'll make it more fun.

I wanted it all, I can't wait for more, I'll be looking every day for the next episode. Damnnnnnnnnn

linda

only obey,

Awesome Story! Can't wait to read the rest and see how far the submission goes!