by Aspire2Provide
well paced and well written, a great read; would be interesting to see things continue with another 'victim'.
Oh your description in Starbucks was priceless!!!
I was giggling at the sight of this poor girl trying not to squirt, and the young guys watching her completed her humiliation
MORE please! I can see this happening to her in a few more places... ;)
Exactly the kind of NEW stuff I'm looking forward to reading! Please write more! PS, I'm also an editor, so feel free to send a story or two over, and be sure to look at my author page. Thank you!!
There is nothing else quite like this. I first read this story a few years ago, and it’s one that I still remember often. Thank you for the wonderful and descriptive read!
Very well done. I dislike external control & I found it unbelievable that she would not read what she signed. This really lowered my scoring.
I mighty read this again but it won’t make my favorites list.
Bill S.
Good story! BUT I have to say all the grammatical errors were so distracting to me. Really interrupted the flow. Was this maybe written by someone whose first language was not English?