All Comments on 'Cassandra and Annie Ch. 01'

I don't know why this was "the beginning of the end", but it was fascinating in a very awkward, college-age way. Basically, this is your standard, first-time threesome, with plenty of hot sex. I enjoyed the part where he ate the one girl while his girlfriend rode him. I also liked that he got to fuck the other girl, even if only briefly and with a condom. He certainly showed more control of his orgasm than some guys his age.

All in all, it was a nice, hot tale of group sex, albeit a little cliche. I also liked that she suggested a group encounter with another man. I was a little disappointed that Annie didn't want to do it with Cassandra yet, but that's a bit of realism creeping, since not every woman is into that or ready for it. I would recommend this as an interesting story of nervous young people having a little orgy. The cheating angle didn't really factor in much (the other girl had a Bible-thumper boyfriend).

I give this one a 5 as well. It had its good points and bad points, but they were all in the plot, and there actually was one in it. This author deserves more notice than he's gotten. Time and more practice will make him even better.