All Comments on 'Castaway'

Thanks for a very nice story.

I really like this story.

sweet, funny, just enough sex to be on literotica, but not overdone, and i think these three could have a little more story to them

I was drawn into this story from the start. Interesting characters and just enough mystery to make me read faster to find out what was going to happen next. Good job!

Good Story, I liked it.

This was an excellent, soft story. The sex was nice, but I was impressed at how little the story hung on it to still be a good story! This was quality fiction, and I'm glad I read it.

Great read, You don't have to have unending sex to make a great story...bravo!

Too Bad, that this is your only submission, this is/was a very good short story.

Maybe another how Michael got to this current place in time, a sequel maybe to this one.

You need to work on the dialogue. The sex talk was kind of stale but otherwise good story.

Unless you're a writer, then please find something else... The dialogue was complete shit. I don't normally critique... But omg. The whole story was forced and completely unnatural and so so predictable beyond reason.

I was very pleased to give this one star

It was a wonderful story. It didn't read like some kind of story a oversex school boy or a pervert would thing would happen in the real world.

This was more believable.

Well done

I Found the Story Very Sweet .. It Had Sex and 2 hot Ladies .. What more could a Guy want

A bit confusing with the exposition of Michael’s past but a lovely, quick read nonetheless.

I agree with redsox04me comment and I too enjoyed the storyline. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️