All Comments on 'Castle of Slaves'

by nkniemi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Please don't leave it there...

i loved this story...please don't finish it there, please keep going!

ellyneiellyneiover 15 years ago
This, however,

was excellent. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
It’s definitely an unusual story

Does he feel sickened by al those broken women? From what you’ve written and reading between the lines I’m still at a bit of a loss, he seemed savage in how he examined and used the women not being careful with their bodies or minds. To the point that he was interested in the one who showed fear. Yet at the end he was gentle with her, rescuer or unrestrained sadist?

Tess (UK)

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