All Comments on 'Castles, Kings & Wondrous Things Ch. 02'

I am intrigued by your story but I feel I've missed part of it. Would love a little more background on the characters, their relationships, and the "sword." I was disappointed not to see the other brother in this chapter. He started the last chapter and I would love to know what his roll we be. I think your writing style is good. it could however be better if there were more detail and description. I like to really feel the characters I read about and I just don't have a handle on yours yet. I will continue to read and I think for a first effort this is really good. Have a great one!

I am quickly becoming an avid fan of this story!! I hope this turns out to be a long, multi series? The characters and storyline are perfect. The only request I have is longer chapters please!! Can't wait to read more!!

Very good story, but could you make the chapters a little longer, to futher the reading enjoyment. Please keep up the good work.