All Comments on 'Catch and Release'

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darcysweetdarcysweetover 14 years agoAuthor
Comment from Author

For some odd reason the file I submitted has centred large chunks of the text. If you're screwing up your face wondering 'why the hell did she do that?' believe me it wasn't intentional. I've resubmitted and hopefully it'll be up looking normal soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved this story!

Really well done. I wish I could give more helpful writing-type feedback but all I can say is I really loved everything about this story. Please continue soon!

darcysweetdarcysweetover 14 years agoAuthor
More to Come

Stay tuned readers, I won't just leave you hanging. Early Feb will see the next installment of Catch and Release.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
ready yet?

still waiting for that next installment!

kiwiplumkiwiplumabout 14 years ago
that was a surprise!

Well that was a truly hot story, I couldn't predict a line of it and I loved it. I do hope that you carry it on!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

please please please get us the next part... please....

darcysweetdarcysweetabout 14 years agoAuthor
There is more coming - promise!

Oh my, you make me feel so guilty with your private and public requests for more on this story. I promise there will be more for Grace, Drew and Jules. The story is planned (in my head) it's fermenting while I finish other projects. I will get back to it.

Darcy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
can't wait for the next part`

i'm floored by this story -- can't wait for more!

MagnoliaSMagnoliaSabout 14 years ago
No!

I'm angry. Really. You can't do that to me! MORE! This is absolutly brutal. More. Right. Now!

luv_romanceluv_romancealmost 14 years ago
where is the next chapter??

it can't be just this one!!! morrreeeee!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Masterfully done

Beautiful characterization and pacing with just the right mix of hot, teasing sex play and anticipation thrown in. Looking forward to the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well written, very erotic

Great pacing and very believable characters - even the quickie finger-fuck at the party was believable. Can't wait to read chapter 2.

Rad'lRad'lover 13 years ago
You never know -

what you'll find when you open a story by an author that you are not familiar with. I opened this story for a quick look and fell in over my shoelaces. Well written, good characters - with just enough background to make it plausible and enough sex to keep it alive. Thanks.

Yobo36Yobo36over 11 years ago
Scorching.

Oh this is hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Holy .....

This is beyond hot. The chemistry between the three is just nuclear!!!! I had to go drench my face in cold water because I made the mistake of reading this before work!!! :squeals: More Drew, more Grace..more Jules damnit!! :apologizes after a few seconds cause she starts cursing when she's all riled up:

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