by darcysweet
For some odd reason the file I submitted has centred large chunks of the text. If you're screwing up your face wondering 'why the hell did she do that?' believe me it wasn't intentional. I've resubmitted and hopefully it'll be up looking normal soon.
Really well done. I wish I could give more helpful writing-type feedback but all I can say is I really loved everything about this story. Please continue soon!
Stay tuned readers, I won't just leave you hanging. Early Feb will see the next installment of Catch and Release.
Well that was a truly hot story, I couldn't predict a line of it and I loved it. I do hope that you carry it on!
Oh my, you make me feel so guilty with your private and public requests for more on this story. I promise there will be more for Grace, Drew and Jules. The story is planned (in my head) it's fermenting while I finish other projects. I will get back to it.
Darcy
i'm floored by this story -- can't wait for more!
I'm angry. Really. You can't do that to me! MORE! This is absolutly brutal. More. Right. Now!
Beautiful characterization and pacing with just the right mix of hot, teasing sex play and anticipation thrown in. Looking forward to the next one.
Great pacing and very believable characters - even the quickie finger-fuck at the party was believable. Can't wait to read chapter 2.
what you'll find when you open a story by an author that you are not familiar with. I opened this story for a quick look and fell in over my shoelaces. Well written, good characters - with just enough background to make it plausible and enough sex to keep it alive. Thanks.
This is beyond hot. The chemistry between the three is just nuclear!!!! I had to go drench my face in cold water because I made the mistake of reading this before work!!! :squeals: More Drew, more Grace..more Jules damnit!! :apologizes after a few seconds cause she starts cursing when she's all riled up: