All Comments on 'Catch Me If You Can'

perfect from start to finish, a masterpiece.

Amazing story, one of the best I've ever read! Fantastic job! Can't wait til your next one!

reminder of good olde University days..............chasing with out a cell/camera phone, that was still to Dick Traceyish.............lol........... looking forward to reading the next chase.

Just one question (though I'll happily suspend disbelief and just ignore it): How does she cross the campus and get to the two locations while so naked? Mmm...could be a story there in itself.

I think these two should have more adventures. Please keep writing.

Marvelous debut! I can't wait to read more.

Lovely writing. Thank you.

I hope this story is your way of leading us on our own "Catch Me If You Can" adventure with you. I loved the humor, anticipation and joy in the story.

Oh my god this is amazing!!! One of the best of read! Please write more!

Great first submission! There are some authors that I read every time they add a new story. You are added to that list.

Beautiful writing.. thank you for sharing!

Really outstanding concept, pacing, and pleasure - well done!

Great concept, execution, pacing, characters, and style! I look forward to reading more of your stories!

Great story! I thought my first submission wasn't bad, but I'm blown away! I can see I'm going to have to up my standards. ;-)

I very much enjoyed this story. Good pacing and build-up. Please continue writing.

Gosh you make campus sex sound fun. Damn good, especially for a first submission. Well written, well plotted. And deliciously hot.

-Rogue

Not to mirror all the other comments about pacing, but yes it definitely kept me wanting more each time he found a piece of her clothes or got another message. The buildup is crucial in a chase game. The sex certainly didn't disappoint either. Great story, keep writing. Why did I waste my time in the library studying when this could've happened...

That story was great make one where she chases him.

This was the best thing I've read on this site ever. I'm always struggling to find something that suits me and this story was just all I ever wanted from erotica.

Well paced, motivations clearly developed, great teasing. Well done!