All Comments on 'Catching Mom Ch. 01'

bet the daughter get fucked by the big dicked pussy wrecker now.since the kids were expecting this otherwise they would have freaked out maybe not though since they are going to collage not college

Good first story .Hope you plan on writing more . Good flow and nice finish .If you keep writing I'll keep reading .thanks

PS loved the pic .bad girl ......

Loved it. Hope you continue. I can see kids blackmailing mother which turns into a threesome...

When will you have more of the story?

Wonderful story with quick and erotic action, love the way two never before intimate siblings react to seeing Mom being fucked by someone other then Dad. I suspect some of the anons will find a way to criticize you but ignore them and post again!

Loved it,,this, surely is a perfect prelude to a series,,,

Although I half expected a twist at the end like the father stepping into view with a cine camera running and congratulating them on a great performance.

I kinda liked it. Hopefully there is no more interracial. Thats just gross to me.

You have a good start here. The only thing out of place is Mom's stud. I think she should lose him when confronted with her kid's knowledge, then move on to take on son and finally Dad gets in the action. Of course, it's your story and I wish you the best.

i would make sure that she would never ever get another man after fucking that guy.

I hope Ryan and his sister treats their mom like the whore she is, but I hope he treats his sister with love and makes her his lover.

Thanks for the read.

If you didn't have room in the story description, you could have taken a paragraph at the beginning of the story to inform the reader that the story included interracial sex. I am not a racist: I would never try to stop (or try to convince that they shouldn't) an interracial couple from exploring their attraction to one another, but I also don't care to read about it.

So what Mommy fucked a black guy? These people who complain about it obviously got serious issues. Since we don't know who the black guy is, maybe give us some background on him. Maybe he owns the gym her husband works at. Maybe he's a client. I liked the article just the way your wrote it and look forward to more of the same. I'm not terribly crazy about big brother calling his hot sister a whore, but she seemed to like it. Good job, keep writing!

How can anonymous say he is not a racists, when he let someone's pigmentation interfere with his erotic ignition system?

I would like to know what happened when Allison visited Ryan that night?

And if Ryan is going to make move on his Mom

start next chapter ASAP

You people arguing racism, or criticising an author's accidental omission, are a sad lot who don't have much to do, and don't have much depth to your personality.

If you don't like the story, just move on, or go to a website about knitting or golf.

Better still, have a go at writing a story yourself.

If you did, then you'd know it's not easy.

You are using the excuse of critique to push your own wheelbarrow load of bitterness.

I enjoyed the story. Now, on to the next one. See? It's not hard.

Oh. Maybe it is hard. That's the whole idea

will everyone please give the guy above applause, for he is going to be mad enough to stop all the worlds problems.

i think writerjab can fix the worlds problems

My sister told me ssshhhh. I walked behind her, we were going to surprise or parents for their 25th wedding anniversary and take them to lunch. Surprise it was, there was mum,bent over the end of the lounge, dad sliding in and out of her doggy style. I backed away, we should go, come back later, my sister said,no, god that's horny,, I stood behind her, my cock thought so. She felt it against her, her hand reached back, mmmm, not so little brother, take it out, what,ssshhh, take it out, I unzipped, my cock sprang out, she grasped it, squeezing it, so hard, then slowly stroking me, her other hand disappeared under her dress. Dad was going faster, mums head was tilted back, I reached under my sisters dress, my fingers finding her pussy, wet, so wet, as she stroked me I worked my fingers into her, I had 3 in her when she orgasmed, clenching her legs together, trapping my hand, she let me go. Stroking my cock, I watched as mum turned and took dad in her mouth, slowly cleaning him. To my surprise, my sister turned and looked at me and knelt and did the same, the only difference was I filled my sisters mouth with cumm, which she swallowed. She then stood and said thanks, I needed that. The lunch didn't seem the same.

More more morree

I absolutely loved the cadence of your story. I cannot wait until you write more!

Good start. I see that chapter 2 was just published which is encouraging as it means you're not a "one and done" author. Hope the second chapter is as hot as the first but a little bit longer.

OK, I'm hooked, keep them coming. Looks like five star and favorites.

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I liked the story, but is there some particular reason to have incorporated interracial sex into it? I know I'm going to get pissed off comments for daring to ask about what I'm sure a lot of people were also wondering, but I'm genuinely curious. Interracial sex obviously appeals to some people, but for me, black men with white women is a major, major turnoff.

Brings back memories for me. Btw I love your pic. You look like a lot of fun.

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Pathetic! Learn English first before writing a story in english.

Make mom more of a bad ass than she is already please

College. Not collage.

I WISH I COULD FILM THE ACTION NAKED!

WOW 😳 That was absolutely incredible 😍 I can't wait to read more 💋🤤