All Comments on 'Catching Serena Ch. 05'

i love them keep them cumming

From part 1.

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"This is our little secret, right?" he asked.

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Erin knows. His friends know. These girls know. The more people know, the greater something will not remain a secret. I mention this only because I have to wonder what will happen when Wendy comes back, when she finds out. Granted this is hardly realistic, but even in the context of the story that's a bit too unrealistic.

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The basic options are she's having an affair of her own and wants a divorce -- hence the late nights and the trip to the "friend" -- or she joins in. Personally, I would find the first a cop-out. Given his friends comments regarding Wendy, how similar she is to Serena, joining in just seems more in-line with the story.

Good story but you seem confused at times - "Jared knelt at the end where Tammy was lying, pointing his cock at the line of girls and rubbing it quickly." So who is Jared? I think you need an editor.

Just fucking wonderful!