All Comments on 'Caught, Blackmailed and Loving It! 001'

story would have been much better had jack been mark's stud son..and heather's brother..

It would be much more erotic if he was real family. Still an excellent piece of erotic writing.

It was just plan hot. I think it was better that he wasn't related.

You start off saying that this chapter has elements of Gay Sex, group and semi-Incest, but since your emphasis is GAy sex you are going to put it in Incest. Do you read what you write?

Enjoyed the fantasy and imagery. Erotic and hot.

Not bad, though I don't really care for degradation. And not that I'm looking for it, but there wasn't really much in the way of "blackmail," was there? The threat to tell others seems somewhat fulfilled by the promise to whore the kid out to the girl's friends.

Your story was fantastic !!! I wish I had an experience like that. I would love to have 2 older men and a girl as well fuck me and do anything they wanted to do to me. Your story is better that it's 2 older men. I don't agree with the other guy who thinks they should all be related. It's better that Jack fucks Heather and not her father. Next I want you to have Jack & Mark fucking each other and sucking each other's cocks. That would be hot.

After part 2 of the story, please continue onto part 3.

Great story. I loved it !!! I truly want to be fucked by 2 men with big cocks while my girlfriend watches. Can't wait for part 2.

what are the chances oF Heather's mother, and the neighbours finding out?

Loved this story ! This is my fantasy - to suck cock and be fucked, used like a little whore while a woman watches me and tells me what a good little cock sucking slut i am.

That was was hot, can't wait to read more.

Deliciously filthy. Came buckets!

This story was so hot it made me cum hard -- and I ate it all up (just like in the story). I too am "bi" (although I prefer men) and I lust after my girlfriend's father. I think I'll "accidentally" leave this story open on my computer for my girlfriend to see. Hopefully she'll be into it and soon she'll be fucking me with her strapon and her father will be feeding me his big cock to suck. I can't wait !!!

Awesome story, loved it

it was fine until you added the daughter. two hot older men taking him like a girl is hot but not a girl doing it.

Very erotic story- well presented