All Comments on 'Caught by the Tide Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Loved it!

I can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Funny and sexy!

I love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Oo...

Another great story of yours and another great chapter. Please don't let us wait too long for the next chapter. I love the characters but of course I hate the cliffhangers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Don't be cruel!

Waiting for your stories is murder on your readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Eager!

I love the story and can't wait for the next installment, also eager to know how they feel to one another.

The love scenes are hot!! I am so glad you updated

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
greast one

really good one.. i read ur last story too.. yep u r a romantic like me ;-). please please keep the chapters coming..

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Is that it?

Is that the finish???

I think you could do a lot with this plot.

NorCalGirlNorCalGirlover 16 years ago
Oh my god

What the hell did he do?

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 16 years ago
Loved it!

Especially loved the description - made me smile.

Dancewithme2Dancewithme2over 15 years ago
Plot and Characters

This was great reading. Whatever the plot or story line it, it is hinted at well enough. What I liked most was the character development, and the descriptions. Both main characters are powerfully developed and Rebecca is such a dream. Oh yes she is rough on the outside but I suspect it is because she is so vulnerable and loving. I adore her already.

I wonder if she perceived that exchange among the guys correctly at the end of this chapter?

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 14 years ago
Loved it

Like your other chapters, this one was great. Loved it.

labellenuitlabellenuitover 13 years ago
OMG

That BASTARDDDDDDDDD, D:

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
You make it seem so effortless...

The dialog, the carefully constructed plot, the rich, intriguing characters. The compelling love play...

I love this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Just Perfect

Nice hand ....

lusherlusherover 11 years ago
ooh you're good

You're really, really good. I am inarticulate in the face of your goodness. Fire bad and tree pretty inarticulate. Yes, you're just *that* good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great

great read

UpHillAllUpHillAllabout 11 years ago

loved it again , thanks

KarensClit1990KarensClit1990over 5 years ago
So good! I loved the dialogue

Can’t wait for more.

Your story has so much promise.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

What the hell Luke!

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 1 year ago

Ah, hopefully Luke's smile and his friends bet are not what they seem to be.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Your ability to draw the reader into the plot and further into identifying with the main characters is awesome. I'll bet you told great stories at campouts and sleepovers, or keeping wide eyed kids awake before bedtime. You must know you are very, very good, even when you are bad.

(A good/great kisser indeed?)

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