by Edison3wire
Excellent story hon, eliminate the gutless coward "Anonymous" comments. If a person had any integrity they would at least have a contact name and email.
the original chapter or Chapter 1 of this Caught story doesn't exist no more. I searched for Shoe Slayer and came up blank and even the first chapter of Caught nothing
There is always some moron out there
who could not string enough words to
write a paragraph and do it properly, yet
they will trash someone's story for what
ever reason, and like the coward Dimwit
_Borgir is, he does not allow feedback.
YUP he can dish it out but can't take it,
Instead of saying why he does not like the
story, he just trashes it, and I know I am
not the only guy you have trashed.
I am sure you are a pathetic wuss and
very lonely as no decent woman would
want anything to do with you, she'd see
in no time just what a worthless schmuck
you are.
Borgir, I bet your death would please many,
I don't see you as ever thinking of anyone
but yourself, So, to paraphrase Dickens in
his Christmas Carol, "Die and decrease the
surplus population."