All Comments on 'Caught in the Middle'

I like it. It will be interesting seeing the way mac and james interact and react to each other. Keep going, I think you have a good story here.

Please keep writing

Take your time and really sink into the characters. The more we know about the characters, the more we care about them and the more invested we become in what happens to them. So far, Kara's cheerful personality makes her a character I could like. I'm undecided on the guys.

Keep it up and I'll look out for chapter 2.

ooooh look twilight in reverse. AGAIN

I'm looking forward to your next chapter. I hope it's soon!

A good start, but PLEASE try not to be too Twilight.

So I know that some of u have expressed some concerns about where the plot line is going to go. Don't worry. Its only chapter one. Twilight is definitely not my style. I am currently writing the next chapter! I also have some surprises coming up, but I'm not giving anything away. If you guys bear with me and keep reading I hope you all will be pleasantly surprised! Thanks for reading.

The right guy will get the girl. :D

Ok story plot,will give it a few more ,,hopefully longer,chapters to see where it is going,But was a bit rushed,I think you could have drawn it out a bit more,with some more info about each one,but will see,a good start,will be looking for the next installment,,soon i hope.

This story beats twilight by far