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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Rating "Caught in the Rain, Ch.1"

Very nice.....lots of potential in this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great start

Great start looking foward to the rest.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
Cliffhanger

Were you afraid noone would read and enjoy what you wrote, Please post part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
A Great Start!

I see these stories are not new, so this comment might never be seen but I enjoyed your first attempt. The old KISS maxim always works. ( and if you were to retry, it would work again I am sure.

Greg

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