All Comments on 'Caught in the Storm'

... between "wave" and "waive" and between "waved" and "waived"!!!

Plus all the other errors!!

If necessary, get someone to teach you!!

Someone like a good Editor!!

Pay no attention to the previous comment. Someone caught up in 100% perfect grammar isn't reading the story for its intended purpose. They just want to criticize the writing style, instead of enjoying the eroticism of the story line. Story was very erotic and made me nice and hard.

Great imagery, intense scenes. Another great story

I have to admit that I am shocked by the relatively low rating of this story. The grammar was only a slight distraction more than compensated by the quality of the story.

I wouldn't have noticed the grammatical errors because I was too busy READING THE STORY. If you are too much of a pussy to post your name after criticizing someone else, then Fuck you.

I must echo the words of the last couple of posters. You wrote a truly excellent story here -- believable, hot, and easily comprehendible. There were some grammar errors, yes, but honestly, that's true in any work of fiction. Look at the Hunger Games -- the books are a grammatical disaster. But the story is good, and that's what matters. It's the same thing here. Keep it up!

Nothing more needs to be said. I could actually see that happening, exactly as you wrote it. Outstanding!

X-Man

The pace you set for your story and the details you provided were both excellent and provided a perfect visual of your characters throughout the story.

Thanks for sharing. I gave you the max of 5 stars for this story.

RecHiker

I may just have to take up jogging.

I liked the story until the end where she walks off with the asshole boyfriend instead of dumping him on the spot.

Bit if a downer at the end.

Loved the contrast between the storm outside and the intensity of what was going on in the cave. I would've liked more detail between the two when they finally got together and had sex. Spaldan is usually so good to give great detail that I was a bit disappointed that he didn't give more there. I enjoyed that there was build up with them getting caught in the storm then going running again then getting caught together again, it made for more anticipation. I wish she had dumped the dirtbag at the end of the story though.

Really fun story, loved it! Thanks for writing