All Comments on 'Caught in the Storm Ch. 03'

Very nice Story, Keep em coming.

The feelings for both characters were well defined and believeable!

Keep up the great erotic reading!!!

Not bad if you're into boring drama-queen, she don't understand/he don't understand psycho-babble tripe. <yawn> If all you aspire to in your writing is gooey wanna-be romance, lacking real challenges, real emotions or real pain, congratulations! You're there. If not, there's more to the plot than just emotional drama. Oh, and you have some interesting usage in your stories. For example, an isle is an island, like in an ocean. An aisle is a passage way or lane like between shelving units in a store. And, in your first Part 1, I've heard of a car door being wrenched (as in jerked) open, but never wretched (as in forlorn or miserable) open. Guess I learned something new there. Does that take a lot of mental concentration, or can you just like blast it open with an evil glare?

But - More sex in your story, Wood make a lot of us happyer!

I was waiting for this chapter. Great job. Can't wait for the next one

Just found this story and I'm so glad I did! It rocks! Love the characters and the sexual build up between the two. Mike's intense lust is very sexy. Please continue, I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Thank you!

THAT WAS GREAT, they finally FUCKED. Wow... a next chapter of Denver and Mikey, but with lot's more sex and make it a bit more rough...How I'd loved to be in Denver's shoes. THIS WAS A REALLY SEXY STORY!!!

Congrats

These were three good chapters, why are we having to wait for the next. I hope the orgasms in the next story are as long as you made us wait.Please hurry!!! I want to FUCKING...CUM

So, in the earlier chapter you make a huge point that she gets her locks changed and gives a spare key to her neighbour. K... so later after her purse is stolen I'm supposed to believe that she can't get into her place. Why not just get Joe to let her in? Going to see if he was home to do that would have been the logical next step. The brother wrecked her life enough and chased away her friends yet somehow she's having some kind of epiphany about how poor Mikey is right when he calls her self centered? How can she be anything but self centered since he cuts off all her avenues to anything outside herself? By the time he goes in for the kill I was already turned off and wanting less.

pretty awsome story more soon

best best best ever story ive ever read on this site omg please do another chaptr !!!!!!!!!PLEASE omg great work loved every bit of it keep it up keep it going

This story is so good.

i loved these stories!! please write another :) they are fantastic especially with her brother so protective.

Kinda inconclusive.

I find it hard to believe Denver--or any woman--would have been won over by Mike's speech. He sounded like a crazed stalker just before he tips over into violence against the object of his obsession. Consensual sex is truly not where I feared this story was headed, and even after the fact I still feel fairly uneasy about the whole encounter.

"With everything I am"???.... very soap opera-esque!!! That line through me off

If she got robbed, then how did they get the door of her apartment open?

So where do these brother/sister relationships go from here? It would be hard to have a normal relationship with your sibling. I don't know.

That women portray themselves as wanting a man who demands and takes what he wants. That's how this reads, because you didn't take the time to come to an understanding. Sure incest is wrong, but in fantasy so what. Take the time to let the conflict build then find resolution.

This idea of a brother raping his sister because he wants it is too easy, and disturbing to see people like that.

Why is ithis so short? So hot.

I hate others trying to control ANYONE 1 star

not the biggest fan due to the obsession level just being creepy but what really bothered me is there is no way her parents don't know about this. they absolutely are ok with this unhealthy obsession that Mikey has for his sister. i wouldn't even be surprised if the author continued the story that they somehow encouraged it or manipulated Mikey into this line of thinking.