by Lucky Mann
Loved the first Chapter, but this chapter lost it big time. I'm not into forced sex, but this took too drastic a turn into pure blown romance -- come on! Put your mind to it, don't rush and you can do better!
There are really some asshole reviewers on this site unfortunately. I liked your story, both parts and hope you continue.
I have seen similar things from parents to what you have this girl dealing with. I like where this seems to be headed and hope you continue. Thanks for a very good story.