All Comments on 'Caught Wetting The Bed'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Did anything else happen between the girls

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Just GREAT

I think the story plot everything great and I laughed at the end !!! VERY GOOD !!! thanks again smco22000@aol.com Carmella

apup76apup76about 14 years ago
Refreshing

I enjjoyed this story very much.

Thank you

lesliejoneslesliejonesabout 15 years ago
agree it's going nicely

i liked the way it developed and the encounter changed as her tone did

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good start

This story has a good base to it I hope you will continue. Might I suggest that you make her submissive to the daughter and play it out with the father catching them making it a very happy family? Otherwise as some of the other poster hinted to it would suck!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
ONE WORD

HORRIBLE

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